What a well written and emotional chapter. My apartment would be filled with home magazines too. I really like how the ending keeps you wondering what her boyfriend wants. In a way, it is kind of scary because the message could be good or could be bad!
I almost learned to play the drums but they were much too loud for me, so for the past 7 years, I've played the saxophone, thus giving me the nickname Jazz.
Anyways, great poem/lyrics, it was a very fun read!
Much luff,
Jazzy
P.S. The only drum set I'd give to a three year old would be one made out of pringles cans, plastic bowls and cooking pots. ;)
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