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Review by Pyramid Jones Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this story. You have a real gift for storytelling. I wonder about the ceremony that linked the horse and the elf in blood. And I liked when sulhupkaar said "away King Sauric" and the king thought he was talking about him. That was cool. I enjoyed reading this. Is it part of a larger work? Good luck in your writing!
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Review of The Gift  Open in new Window.
Review by Pyramid Jones Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This poem I liked because my name is Jason and it seems to fit my life. The rhymes were nice and the poem flowed well. I hope I can go on with my head held high. It's inspirational. I don't understand life, but this seems like a pretty good way to go- helping others. IDK. It is draining though. I've found that where I live, a lot of people don't want any encouragement or help. Just go on though. I guess that's what you have to do. Good poem!
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Review by Pyramid Jones Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I thought Moon was a kid at first so I guess that was a little confusing, but I'm pretty dumb so whatever. I liked the poem because I like kids stuff anyways. I liked the part where Pam says the kitten will have to have a jab. That was pretty funny. It's like aahhhhhh she'll have to have a shot. Rotten kitten. stubborn maybe. Is there a lesson here? Or is it just nice rhymes? I guess I always thought that children's stuff always had to have a lesson,but I guess it's really more about the rhyme and fun of it which this poem certainly captures. I enjoyed reading it. Pretty cool stuff.
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Review of Frozen Mind  Open in new Window.
Review by Pyramid Jones Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Wow, that was some powerful stuff. Sounds like you've been through some kind of trauma. I know the feeling. I think I got PTSD from meeting a certain man in the woods whose name I will not mention here. I hope you can heal. It was a great story, like very real. Thanks for posting it. I enjoyed reading it.


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Review of Life Goes By..  Open in new Window.
Review by Pyramid Jones Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Being an honest believer in the forced words form of consciousness raising, I would say make it more spontaneous, but who the heck am I to say?
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Review of Seagulls Hush  Open in new Window.
Review by Pyramid Jones Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I guess probably not huh, judging by the tone of the rest of the poem. I like the echos from a distance though. that was nice.
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Review by Pyramid Jones Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
that's pretty heavy dude. I've been on the edge of madness a few times too brother. reminds me of cowboy song by thin lizzy. the cowboy life the life for me.....good luck man.
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Review of Marry Me  Open in new Window.
Review by Pyramid Jones Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
cool freakin poem man. great. I love it.
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