I think it just shows that God doesn't need you to be rich or perfect but just needs you to work towards his goal. Great poem. Very inspiring I don't think you need to change a thing in this piece.
It had a interesting setting for what was happening in the story. There are a few spelling mistakes you could try to fix. It was a very hopeful ending for someone who had just experienced heartbreak.
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