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Review of Just a Fairytale  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a really good set of lyrics, and I enjoyed writing them.
I like when you put about the face in the dirt, but used the words so differently each time, I think that was rather creative.
It would be better if the song was longer, and told a bit more about the story, like what the man did, and how sad/depressed/angry the woman is, and maybe she gets some revenge?

Keep writing, this is very good.

Jasmine Ocean McCabe
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