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Rated: E | (2.5)
nice attempt...
i got the inner feeling u wanted to say but still i wud say must improve..

why dont u add more stanzas
well just a suggestion...

read my short story on-:
http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1166...

i wud luv 2 c yr comments....infact wud luv to c comments of every1 who believe in luv.
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