What a woman wouldn't give to have a nutcracker pony. An interesting concept, and I got a few giggles out of it. Wish it would have been a bit longer, but still good.
Really cute, there are a few lines that are my favorite, the awkward wrinkle in the nose, and the hugs so hard you could almost explode. I don't really know how poems should go, but it did seem a little off, not that it took away from it really. And maybe its just off for someone who doesn't understand poems. :)
I like where you were going with this, just a few misspelled words but I like the feel I got from it. The last sentence gave me chills, knowing how close to madness people come. :)
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