I enjoyed reading this. It is very different from anything I have read before. It is kind of sad. It sounds like someone with a very low self esteem. Someone that cannot take himself seriously, therefore everyone else sees him as he sees himself. This was very interesting. Good luck on all of your future writings.
I enjoyed reading this story. Are you planning on adding more to it? I think it has great potential. I think this is the beginning of something that could turn out great. I look forward to reading more of your stories. I wish you the best of luck in all of your writings.
I just really do not understand the meaning of this poem. Honestly it doesn't make since to me. I am sorry to be a downer. And I hope I do not offend you. Was this something from the top of your head or something you did for fun? I wish you the best of luck in your future writings.
I think you did a wonderful job. I am a mother of 5 (4 girls and 1 boy) and 1 new grandbaby. My children and grandbaby are the most important things in my life. Good Job!!
I think this story could have a lot more potential. Maybe a little more detail of the haunted fun house. I would also add a little more detail of the children in the story. But overall I think it is a good read. I believe you could take this a lot farther. Good luck with future writings
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