I like the way this poem gives the feel of chaos all around you, as if you're observing it. Has it occured to you that these same events could be being seen by the person next to you, and you're part of the pattern? If the chaos is all around you, why not be with you and in you as well? And is it chaos, or just the way life moves?
Sorry, i have a tendancy to rapidly fire philosophical questions at questions as simple as "How are you?"
Thanks for sharing,
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