First i'd like to say, I am a major fan to the "Trilogy" of the Dragon Age series, I have played extensively through Origins, Awakening, all DLC and Dragon Age II, seeing all different options and viewpoints, and I admit I was surprised to see that one has created an Epilogue of what "possibly" happens with Hawke prior to the dissapearance in the game's timeline. I was curious to what was writen so far as I can see that it is still a pretty big WIP from my opinion... But so far I liked the dialogue narrations, it was thought out; though my only disapointment and perhaps to many few out there is that neither male or female Hawke version for the Warrior Class has been written; as it is personally my favorite, though as well Rogue was not either.
Another thing perhaps to consider in option is to ask the reader if they decided/have killed or spared Anders during the plot of Anders' destorying the Chantry, as it would be confusing to the readers if they chose the templar ending if Anders' still lives because unless by high approval/rivery Anders' WILL NOT Take your side if Templars is chosen, and WILL be killed with no options.
Just bits and pieces of critical detail must be kept in mind for attempting an Epilogue even fan made as it for most entertainment MUST have a sync line with the actual game storyline, but because DA II is so open ((Not as open as DA I imo..), It is indeed a challenge to make an interactive to acomadate every individual's players choices that they chosen such as if certain character's died/lived, Etc. It is a vast project and must be taken critical into detail and many branches of possiblities to sum up past choices to create a suitable fan-made epilogue.
Lastly I will warn advise that it would be very helpful and important to mention and WARN of possible SPOILER ALERTS as for those who have NOT completed/played the game, that this Interactive WILL have plot spoilers, and that is not fun for anyone so to have a prior warning before the story is entered to warn readers to continue at their own risk of spoilers, would be most approriate to assist.
Hope my review helps! :)
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