This poem is very strong. It speaks about fear and motivation all in one. I enjoyed reading this because i can relate to it in many ways. It reached out to me because I feel like your words spoke to me. Many times in our lives we feel like we cant succeed in something but trying is the key to success and i think that your poems direction was very strong and positive. i enjoyed reading it and i hope you continue to write more and always believe in yourself. god bless
i rate this a 5.0 because i can truly relate to how u feel. now i dont know what exactly it is you are talking about but i know that i too have felt these same feelings on more than one occasion in my life and its sad because it brings back so many things reading this, but I have also found some peace in my life and i know how to deal with certain things now, but there still comes the times when i stop and think how unfair life can be to let so many bad things happen that we dont ever get an answer for but we just have to trust god and let some things be the way they are meant to be.
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