Jacqueline's (jacquelinew) Reviews

This is how i feel almost everyday. This is beautiful and i believe you will achieve your goal. When your heart is in something to that extent their is no way you can possibly fail. Life is all you can make it be, and when you go out of your way to make someones else's life better that is an extraordinary and wonderful thing.

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Review of A Precious Stone - A Story In 21 Pieces

Review by Jacqueline

Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

Wow, when i first started reading this, it was not what i expected. I am so sorry for what you went through, that is a horrible thing. But thank god you were able to rise above it. By putting your story out there i believe people will be able to relate and get some comfort from it if they've had the same thing happen to them like you want. I am glad you are able to finally speak on what happened to you, that takes a lot of courage. And i am even more glad you could over come those things and not let them destroy your life and who you are because every is and will be okay.

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Review of I Shutter

Review by Jacqueline

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Oh wow that was nice. It shows how peoples words can really do number on us. I love how gory it was and how i could picture it.

5

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Review of An Encounter

Review by Jacqueline

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Most amazing thing I've ever read. It was captivating and had my attention the whole time. It was easy to follow and i loved the it rhymed! I wanted to read more and more, I love how you used things we could all relate to and how i could really feel the emotion behind this. It was really really good. I wonder how long it took you to write this and the mindset you had when you did it.

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Review of I Promise

Review by Jacqueline

Rated: E

| (5.0)

This was really good and i could picture every single detail in my mind and I became sad when i found out he was dying. I really want to read more to know why all this is happening.

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Review of Sweet Decay

Review by Jacqueline

Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

Wow that was really good, i loved your similes and the mood of darkness you portrayed. Made it seem so real i could just image this in my mind.