Good morning! I thought this was a very good take on how we view our own shadows. I enjoyed the perspective of the subject as well as how it was written in first person point of view. I will say, call me a little old fashioned but, the 'ur' and 'u', became quite frustrating for me while I was reading. I would ask that you do not abbreviate words. I believe that abbreviating words takes away from how others see your emotions and value of your own work. Besides the abbreviated words I thought your piece was quite insightful.
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