Very Good. Long time since I have been captured by the characters in a short short story. Especilly one younge enough to be my great grandson. I would like to see them receive a little more punishment. Maybe one that leads to more rule breaking or some other twist.
Yes,It is indeed a sad love story. A very good first entry to Writers.com. With the feeling you put into this story, I am sure that your future writings will get even better and better.
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