You call this "rough"? I think it's a pretty good poem. Everyone can relate to it. We all yearn for a certain place where everyhing is just peaceful and where we can be truly ourselves, devoid of any pretentions. The poem had a touch of melancholy, and it is something that can be felt by the readers. Great job!
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