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Review by IshmaelIsFoolish
Rated: E | (3.5)
I love it when people make their own sides :)
It's so fun~! I'd recommend referring to them by their functions because it's a little hard to keep up with so many successive name reveals so close to eachother, though! When writing, you sometimes need to take into consideration how a reader will react to information - just because it makes perfect sense to you who has pondered over it for ages, doesn't mean it will make sense to a reader whose reading it for the first time. It's better to space name reveals out over a longer story. The ending was quite cute though :)
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Review of Acceptance  
Review by IshmaelIsFoolish
Rated: E | (4.0)
The imagery is really pretty and makes the tone really soft, and the poem has a lovely moral :)
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