This book was absolutely amazing. I could not stop reading it and I can't wait to move on to the next part of Jade's story! It was so full of suspense and action. If this was printed into a book, I would have it on my shelf in a heartbeat! The only thing I found that could be edited was in the first chapter. There was a small typo I think. It said "Kane didn't want spotted." I think it was supposed to be "Kane didn't want to be spotted." I didn't catch anything other than that. The characters were well shaped and consistent, and I loved Jade's character! I can't express what a great story and plot line this was. Super, great, awesome job!! I'm off to read the next one! :D
I absolutely loved this poem. It was very easy to read, and the imagery and detail was great! I usually find it hard to read poetry, but it just flowed so easily. I love all things fantasy too, so that's an added plus. :) I definitely would like to read more of your writing now! Keep up the awesome work!
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