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Review of In Their Eyes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I love this. I really don't know what to say; it has a unique beauty to it. The choppiness of your style lends a lot to the scattered and unfocused main character. The story is very touching. The warmth of Alexa comes right through the eerie nature of their final meeting. Write on.
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Review of THE CATCHERS  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
I can't really tell what's going on...a bunch of guys working on a turkey ranch, trying to get them into the crates. Very difficult to understand, but I think there's an interesting story here. It would do well as a "day in the life of..." kind of story.
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