Wow! I really loved this story and thought that it was very well written. It brought out the awkwardness between the girlfriend's parents and the boyfriend that is so frequently seen in real life.
Well done. Keep on writing, as you are very talented.
I am looking forward to next time you post a story. :)
RN
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