I really like how you personalized the demon, by giving her a name. You were able to seperate yourself from your "demon," being naughty. You appeared to me to show that the naughtiness is not you, but you will still have to pay for what happened. I really do like this. I guess because, I, too recently acquired a "demon." You portrayed the feeling very well. Guilt and consequences...Again, I do like this. Good job!!
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