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Review by Mia Anderson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I love how short and sweet this poem is, and it has a great message. I like the ABAB rhyme scheme, and think that it fits well with your poem. I also like your choce of vocabulary, using words like "kith" and "kin",words that are practically extinct in today's society made it seem so much more realistic.
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Review by Mia Anderson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, this is very powerful. It really hit me in the feels, because even though I am only thirteen, I struggle with undiagnosed depression. I don't know how you could possibly improve this because it is pretty amazing already. Poetry this good is hard to find nowadays, so I really like this. I am so very sorry about the passing of your wife.
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