I enjoyed reading this so much. It took me back to a time when romance and love had a pure sense of sincerity and compassion. It was sweet and intriguing. Thank your for sharing such a nice piece.
Beautifully written and could feel winter approaching. Maybe it is wishful thinking because it is so hot down her in Louisiana. I would love read more.
I was actually singing this as I was reading it. I have a cat named "Little Cat" she adopted me and moms over 3 years ago. I think she can dance too! :)
This poem reminded me of times when I use to go hunting with my ex-husband. These were times I remember that were good. I remember watching the deer, turkeys and I remember how the sun would light the fields in the early morning. Those were times I enjoyed thank you for writing this piece. Took me back to a good time in my life.
I love the flow and I especially liked how you formatted it into an hour glass. This piece actually made me feel as though each line I read, was a part of the hour glass of life. I don't have someone special but if I did I would have held them and told them how much I loved them. Opps, for got about Mom, she just got a big love hug.
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