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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Arctic!
I am not a professional reviewer but I do want to leave my feedback.
I think it is a great start to a good story. I am filled with intrigue. I also like how the conflict starts as soon as we start reading and the action was a perfect way to introduce us.
I would like to see more detail and length in the chapters and more development in the relationship of the two characters.
But I think it is an awesome start.
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