If I remember correctly, this entry was a winner and I can see why. Great idea; a well-written piece. I liked the description of the neighbor's reaction and their relationship with Fluff's owner. Also I like the open-ended ending.
Keep entering for writer's cramp. I do not usually read other entries beforehand, but I welcome the chalenge.
I can totally appriciate the imagery used. If you get a chance to go back though, you will find some missing cammas. I wonder why she smiles at the beginning (even a little bit). I also wonder how old she is, because that would effect her understanding of events.
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