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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Pretty intense. Good wriiting. The only thing I would suggest is to leave off the age of the men surrounding her, it seems a little strange that six men about to commit a crime are all exactly 30 years old. Otherwise I thought it was well written.
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Rated: E | (2.0)
I'm sorry I'm not a huge fan of poetry. I liked the part about the light piercing through the clouds, great visual. I would stay away from over used catch phrases like "No one left behind" i.e. no child left behind.
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