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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
impressive. i love the way you set the scene at the start, it draws you in and forces you to keep on reading. the imagery you use reminds me of where i am living at the moment, which makes me feel like its a story thats close to home. i like all of the story but i feel as if the eighth para does not do the story justice. other than that i lokk forward to reading more of your work
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