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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is not an easy type of story to write! I thought you did a wonderful job with your imagery. Your personification of the water "gurgling peace laden promises" was absolutely brilliant. I really enjoyed it. The only reason I didn't give you a 5/5 was so that you'd be encouraged to outdo yourself next time!
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