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Review by Pow chika wo wow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I feel bad for the little girl. I wish she could have lived longer, to experience the world and such. I wish she would have lived longer, to a ripe age before she had died. No two year old deserves to die like that. I hope she's happy in heaven, forevermore being happy and jolly.
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Review by Pow chika wo wow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a wonderful, well written poem, and beautiful indeed. I like the choice of words and how you describe things in it, and although short, it is very good indeed. Bravo, for you've made an original peice. I'll make sure to check if you ever make more of these!
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