Hello Taizia. My name is Hank. I really enjoyed this story. It felt very real and reminded me of encounters I have made over the years. I love to travel and never feel like a stranger no matter where I am. I think your story was well structured. I love the way you separated your characters and gave the reactions of the parents. Great story telling. I saw a few typos but nothing too serious. Good grammar, spelling and sentence structure. As with any good story, you left me wanting more. Please continue to expand on this story, I would love to read more and find out how it ends! (I am pretty sure this story will have a happy ending -- "boy gets girl etc." -- I hope.)
Thank you for sharing and I look forward to reading more of your stuff. Write On!
I thought this poem was cute and funny. I also understood this poem. Sometimes poetry does not make sense to me and it is very difficult to read. I can read it over and over and still not get it. Which can make a person feel stupid.
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