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Review by Helviblu Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi Penman,
My heart says this is a wonderful poem!You created a lot of beautiful imagery, along with a
lovely flow. I love poems that rhyme and I think you followed through with a nice rhyme scheme.
I only have one minor suggestion, if you break it up into quatrains it would be a little easier to read, other than that, I really enjoyed it!
Thanks for sharing! ... Helviblu :o)
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Review by Helviblu Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi Akina,
The depth you create in your poem is absolutely wonderful. The imagery you have created in this poem is very nice and your selection of words made it stand out. I really enjoyed reading it!
Thanks for sharing, Helviblu :o)
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