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Review of In The Air  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I don't know much about haikus, but this seems good to me. Your description seems very "in the moment" and calm; if that was what you were going for then congratulations because that's how I felt after reading it. I liked the comparison of wind against your skin to a lover's touch.
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