This is beautiful Zeke. So so so true. It reminds me of our blatant disrespect we have for our beautiful world and how quickly it changes with just a word or action from the mouths of greed, but it also tells me that perhaps this beautiful tree just grew old and eventually died after giving so much pleasure to humanity. Beautiful.
You have followed my writing and for that I thank you. I can easily relate to your style of writing Zeke and I think I am going to enjoy reading your poems. The inner battle, conformity versus aloneness - that is a hard one for me too.
I love this. I love the line "Festooned with strands of gossamer". Your words conjure up a world quite different to the lives of those living elsewhere in the building. It reads of being imprisoned within oneself too. Thank you for sharing.
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