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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

The poem tells of a person, wanting sincere escape, from existence. No, not to the point of leaving this side, just shutting down and closing out.

Very straight-forward, knowing full well what depression entails. Self and darkness, you would like nothing better than to fade into the woodwork.

Making everything that is stealing your feelings of self-worth and health disappear, while sleep engages. Hoping to arise anew, yet, only time will tell...

It's a piece of raw emotions. Continued Success...
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
What a masterful roller coaster of Triumph. This is Superb Writing.

I loved this initmate cinema. It was jammed packed with Suspense and Intrigue. It had me looking for a tissue, while praying that God would move on your family's behalf.

It traveled down the previous roads of faith, during hard times, colorful memories of your earthen struggles. Yet, the victory was sealed, before the foundations of the world.

I loved this True to Life Drama, of perserverance and oneness of mind, body, soul and spirit..

The vivid portrayals, of the characters and the overwhleming obstacles, that all had to get through,

was no doubt more than worth it. The pefection of his plan, was revealed in the Maker's Creation

and Delivery, of your Angel Kenedie, given with his endless love..

Masterfully conveyed in passion for life, love and faith, that refined your outcome, against all odds to present to you, your "Miracle Baby." Thank you for sharing this work!.

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