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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
The website that you link is sending back a "403 Forbidden" code you might need to find another picture or move it someplace that anybody can access it from
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
The nipples on the picture just kills it for me
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Shouldn't the pichu be in eggs?
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Would've given more stars if parenthesis was put after the Spanish words it breaks the immersion to copy and go to Google Translate to translate the words
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Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
Short piece and one of the links gives a 403 error
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well this is going fast btw

Araron shrugged. Apparently, Ashley was the name of the teacher who abandoned his class. "I guess I must be. Nobody told me anything about what happened to her. Is she sick or something?"

That his should be a her I think
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