SunnyHayes's (havenite) Reviews

SunnyHayes

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#2728280

Review of Losing Faith

Review by SunnyHayes

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I had to look up pyre to see what it is, but thats not your fault. Beautiful feel to this and it show's the emptiness that abruptly intrudes into our faith. You should right more & maybe something of a historic nature/ feel :) But I'm just an amatuer.

S.Hayes

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#2724898

Review of Spring

Review by SunnyHayes

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Very cute little ditty:) Keep churning them out.

S.Hayes

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#2724884

Review of " Down Home Cook'in "

Review by SunnyHayes

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Mmmm...Made me so hungry for the work's! Great poem/ Ode to grandparent's everywhere:)

S.Hayes

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#2724861

Review of One Speck

Review by SunnyHayes

Rated: E

| (5.0)

This speaks volume's I think. Anyone who has been through this can relate. Great work.

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#2724855

Review of Brand New

Review by SunnyHayes

Rated: E

| (4.5)

This is a really good rhyme:) You spelled "beand" in the first line instead of "brand", but really it's an awsome ditty.

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#2722537

Review of Abuse, My short story

Review by SunnyHayes

Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

Brave is an understatement here. I have similar tales of childhood that I'm not able to write about yet, but I'm so proud of you for sharing your personal thought's this way. I think you have potential to write a book. A very helpful book:)

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