I liked the idea behind this poem, I don't think it flows as nicely as it could, but I do like it. It raises issues in a neat and emotional way that seems to pick at your conscience. Well done
This is a very nice poem, with some very beautiful images, well done
I especially like the ending, which says to me that even though we've done some things that are wrong, we can always fall back into those hands that have held us, I like this notion a lot and you captured it superbly.
So, altogether a wonderful poem, you should be proud
There is definitely something magical in the way you write, always taking me off into some distant land of legends and myths.
This is definitely a wonderfully empowering piece, filling the reader with the urge to go out into the night and try to feel the same energy as you describe in this poem. Very peaceful, but very powerful, as if there is more to the speaker of the poem than meets the eye, maybe an inner strength that you cannot see from the outside. I don't know...that's the impression I get
The rhythm of the poem adds to the atmosphere, almost like a nightmarish drum rhythm at some points. Overall, I like this poem, yet the full meaning behind it is a bit lost to me
I think this is a lovely poem, it certainly doesn't need to rhyme as it gives off a wonderful feeling. The place is very well described and takes the reader there almost immediately. Well done
This is almost a great poem, it's got the foundations of being very emotionally intense, but it's not quite there yet. I'm one of those useless reviewers who know what there is to fix, but can't suggest *how*.
There definitely needs to be more emotion, we need to feel how you're feeling, make your words more intense, dig deep inside yourself for them, I promise you'll find them.
It's a great start though, and a good poem as it is
I liked this, but I'm not sure it had the spark it needs to make it a 5.0. I think it needs a little more Buffy crazy-speak, and a little bit more detail about the kiss with Angel as it took me a while to figure out. Otherwise it's good and definitely what she should have said
I was given an upgrade as a gift and I know I won't be able to keep up the repayments as I live in the UK and have no idea what it will cost me. Do you have any idea what that 3month upgrade of $15 would be in sterling?
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