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Review of Broken Heart  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
I felt that first line and it took me back to my very first heartbreak! I'm not sure on any punctuation as I am relearning all of the rules, but I enjoyed the raw emotion. The reminder of God being in control really hit home, a very true statement. Keep writing!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
LOVE THIS! I like how a simple topic is turned into something complex and fun! Your hair goes through so many changes in life and I love all of the details you have given!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I am dying to know what happens next! Keep writing! I have all kinds of scenarios going in my head and can't wait for more!
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