O.K I really loved this it was so good i'm going to mark this as one of my favorites and come back and read over and over again. It was really good. My favorite part is "And if you think climbing Everest is hard, or surviving the middle night sun is fun, then maybe you can, bring my heart back, from New York." I can very well relate to this story. Well I can't think of any other thing's to say except keep writing and great job! :)
This was really good!!!! It was also sad though.;( I'm sorry for your loss. Everyday I think about cutting myself, killing myself, or running away. But all I can think about is the thing's i'll miss if I do.
I like this. I'm not really sure what type of writing it is though. I also don't understand the last two sentences. " The repeat of icicles tinkling, and the sound Nancy made as she hit the ground. It sure didn't sound like the icicles." Other then that I liked this very much.
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This is a really good poem. I can rely to this very much because it's what I think about everyday. My favorite line is " I sometime's think i've never lived, It's all my imagination, My mind is just some kind of sieve, and reality's its creation. Great Job on this.
I love this story it's very good and has a lot of details. It was vey sad but good. i don't really like reading very long sad stories but I loved this one. Great Job. I'm gonna readmore of your work now that I have read this one. Great Job!!
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