Good little story here, although I do think that the sexual scene might be more effective if drawn out a bit. It seems rather rushed, almost like it was an afterthought to the whole story or something. Even separating the one long paragraph into two or three smaller ones and expanding them a little bit might help. I was also a bit thrown by the random bold lettering, which seemed to only show up occasionally when there was dialogue. Still an enjoyable read overall though.
Nice little fantasy here. Very erotic idea, the imaginary or invisible lover who disappears if we try to see them. I also like how you enhanced the story with sensory descriptions and things we can picture to set the scene, ex: full moon, cold night, crisp air, smoky single-malt, etc.
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