Madds's (hallows101) Reviews

Madds

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22 Public Reviews Given

22 Total Reviews Given

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#3547984

Review of The Las Vegas Spectacle

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Wow! Your a really good writer! Keep writing. Your poem really gives people a view of Las Vagas for those you havent been there before like me. It was really good keep writing. You should check out some of my things ive written. Thanks for your time
Madds

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#3545236

Review of Euphrates

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Rated: ASR

| (4.0)

This is realy good poem, But i don't normally read them, ha ha. I like how you repeat, "He is nothing ore than Satan, To be of Satan he is proud". It really pushes the meaning.
One thing I don't understand though is why you call your poem Euphrates? Please let me know.
Madds.

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#3544200

Review of True Love

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

This is very true and sinsere love story! Or poem (: Ha ha. I saw that your "Name" was HarryPotter? Are you a fan? Im absolutly in love with the series! I have written a little story about Harry Potters son, Albus, and his journey to the school. I hope you will read it. It is called The Life of Albus Severus Potter. Enjoy!
Madds

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#3543912

Review of Fallen, Scene 1

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Rated: ASR

| (4.0)

I thought it was very cute to tell a story from wolf's point of view. How you gave them their own point of vieew like they were humans! My favorite line was , "Off to see the humans" super sweet. I haven't read a book about wolves since White Fang! Have you read it before?
Madds

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#3543739

Review of The Yuckster and the Grapefruit

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Rated: E

| (3.5)

I liked this very much it was funny, witty, and true. The boy, buck, should have been discribed more though. other wise this poem was very good and i do not even like poems that much at all!! Even though you wrie poems i think you would like my two storys i have writen. check them out please.

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#3543728

Review of Trick or Tweet

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

I noiticed the discription said short story. Well you certainly gave me a surprise! I like surprises though. Now about your story. I thought it was very very cute and funny. It its a good story to tell kids who like halloween of course. I liked it a lot . it was excelent

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#3543727

Review of Hiking the Everglades Trail

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Rated: E

| (3.5)

i liked it but i think that you should discribe the characters more and tell what they look like. other wise it was very good although i dont think i would read it again. it should have more body to it and more excitment for the reader. and you normally dont want to start of a story with a quote

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#3542301

Review of The Immortals: The Witches Immortal

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Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

i like this one a lot(: Write more please!

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#3542292

Review of Harry Potter and the Heirs of Power

Review by Madds

Rated: 13+

| (1.0)

I think it is terrible to change the story of Harry Potter. It should stay the way it is because it is perfect the way J.K. Rowling wrote it. I highly dout you even read the books in the first place.