Fantastic! The journey into madness by a character driven by singular obsession - I love the way in which you allow readers to build empathy with the character and then take them to a very dark place. What I liked most about it was that I didn't see it coming until the later parts of the story, which is somethign I don't find very often, and I'm glad that the final moment wasn't laboured too much.
I look forward to reading more!
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