And how I can relate to this too! A very eye-opening piece, and well thought out, definately worth a rating of at least 4.5. Your use of vocabulary is very good, and you make your piece very interesting.
What stood out for me was the comparison you made of Harry Potter to "the golden eras of the royalty, Hollywood, Bollywood, or even Poirot".
I enjoyed this article a lot, and it is definately a job well done!
Pretty good, but I think you need to work out a couple of details before you continue. For example, you first state that "I fought my way from the bustling street to a quiet, dark alley", only to continue to say that it is night. It would be unsual for the streets to be busy at night. However, over all your story is good, and I am curious to read more!
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