i really liked this story very good and a very original idea well done it is i liked the way the artificial intelligence was influenced by the way that people had used the computers for their own sexual pleasure and it was pretty cool that the computer program was able to devise a plan to save itself by coming up with a plan to populate the new universe nice work! also i liked that you added a lot of technical info to make it sound realistic
a nice touching poem its sad that the soldiers have to be so far from their family s i could imagine what they go through . to be stuck in a war and have your loved ones so far away you have to respect there commitment i hope that soon they will all be home and that one day we find a way to deal with the worlds problems in a better way so that our families don"t have to be separated in such a terrible way ever again
very cool story i loved it that was so cool that you told it from the chocolate bars point of view i really didnt expect that. i was waiting for the guy to just eat him or something and then you threw in the romantic part at the end very well done! and i love the way that the chocolate bar enjoyed being melted i would have thought a chocolate bar would be scared of melting
that was a very good article i felt like i was informed and your writing style made it interesting enough to hold my attention right through to the end . well done thanks for sharing it i like your style of writing so i am going to read the story you have linked here
next
very nice poem i was really impressed very spiritually influenced i though .
the line that says " And as we help them rebuild their lives, may we also rebuild
our faith and tolerance in a people not so unlike us after all."
for some reason that line made me think of the people of Haiti
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