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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is really good. It made me laugh. The sad part is I could see Naruto actually doing this to Sasuke. Thank you for the funny story, and keep writing my friend.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A very nice read. You captured Trixie's personality quite nicely. The ending cliff hanger makes me want to read more. A few spelling errors to point out, near the beginning you had two words that weren't suppose to be capitalized. Other than that I didn't catch any obvious ones. Over all, great read!


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A great story. You had a few typos and grammatical errors that could use fixing, but other than that it was a great story. You hit Fluttershy's personality spot on. Great read and good character composition. Keep writing my friend, I can't wait to read more.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Great read! I love this pairing, and I think you did a wonderful job at putting them together and having him propse at the train station at sunset. It was amazing and had a great feeling put into the writing. Again, great read. And good luck writing my friend.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Another good read in the series. Not as good as the others, but still good enough to keep me focused on the story. Over all, great works, a few spelling errors, but other than that a great read. I can't wait for the next one to be written! Keep at it my friend.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Another great read! It flows nicely and keeps you on your toes wondering what is going to happen next. Love the paring of Naruto and Hinata. A little side note, you put "too" where you should have used "to". But other than that I didn't catch any spelling errors. Another great read, and I look forward to the next one.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
A amazing read. I have watched Naruto, but I believe that this would have made a more interesting story line for him. I am impressed and can't wait to read the next part. This is by far my most favorite couple and I think you did am amazing job paring them in this story. A couple of typos, but other than that, a great read. Easy to follow and intriguing.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
A very nice read. I can't wait to read the next one!
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This is a very good read. It is captivating and something I can relate to with the bullying. I noticed that your grammar, punctuation, and spelling could use a little polishing, but other than that it was really good.
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