"Your love flows through me,
the way winds of this earth bring life to still water.
Effortless, yet everlasting.
Fields may grow vigorously in the spring,
but in fall they wither away in the cold, crisp air.
No matter the season,
always knowing that your love for me will never end,
keeps me warm even in the coldest of all nights.
I can’t help but to stay wrapped tight in a quilt stitched from thoughts of you.
Life seems as though it pauses for hours before I reach a point of faintness,
this rush comes whenever I feel your undeniably, caressing touch.
Believe, that I could behold my last breath,
still your voice would echo loudly in my mind.
Soothing all my pains,
while bringing light to the darkness inside me.
Even in death I would live,
for the love that we have; it would not allow me to let go.
I could be placed in the hottest of hell's flames,
but love pounding from your heartbeat would send ripples of calmness to me.
Reminding me of moments we have spent in the cool summer nights,
while cleansing me of all that is evil.
Still no matter where life brings us, or how long our journeys will keep us apart.
I am comforted by the love that keeps us united, forever, and always.
For you, and only you, are my undeniable."
I found this old poem today. It's written 2004 and it tells so perfectly of everlasting love and how the writer feels.
There is no way of denying love.
It is a beautiful poem and I believe many people can relate to this item very much, because nowadays we travel so much. Work might as well separate couples against their will, but hopefully true love will find it's way no matter what future will bring.
My favorite parts are verse 2 and 4
"All these years gone by
I've wondered where you are
All the while I hope
Like wishing, upon a star
That some day I may see you
To tell you, how I feel
Let you know
My love for you is real
I can’t stop loving you"
"I don't know where we go, from here
Don't know that you even care
There's one thing I know for sure
I'll never stop loving you
Distance and time
Can't change my feelings for you
I can't stop loving you
is a beautiful poem and a heart warming story all together. Thank You for sharing and keep writing!
My favorite part is the ending:
"When you hear “it’s a woman’s choice”
Ask what the baby would choose;
I can answer for the lives
The world should never lose."
Is a beautiful and excellent poem, which is well written and words are so true. It's light and it has nice flow of words. Those are good words for everybody to remember.
My favorite lines are:
"Sharing your heart without hesitation
giving your time without reservation."
"Think of the souls you might have graced
with just a simple smile upon your face."
Is such a beautiful and perfect poem. The poem is lifelike portrait of you and your grandmother. The love and bond between you two is clearly seen. There aren't good enough words to tell how you touch the readers mind.
"Even today I see those blue bells in her garden dreaming
On our bench I hear those fairie convention bells ringing"
Thank you for sharing!
Storm
PS. I have similar memoirs of my grandmother and I wrote a short poem too ( One white rose).
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