It is always to me a pleasure to read true yet interesting stories such as yours. I think it is very well written, in educating the reader on things such as the right time for young people to patronize alcohol as well as the age limit for those willing to see the nightclubs and others. I believe it is a worldwide problem for the youth in finding something interesting to do with their free time. However, I suggest developing one’s talent would be the greatest and most rewarding action to take when one feels bored. Be it singing, dancing or even chatting (having good educative conversations with your peers) it is all better than getting addicted to a life that is not worth your reason here on earth. I hope you find a more interesting activity soon. Good luck.
This is an interesting story, educative as well as obviously well written. I hope to arrange events better in this way as the writer did. In addition, I sympathize with her for her fall at the kitchen. Hoping to read more of your works Senora, brilliant story telling.
It is an interesting short story also realistic. Writer easily expresses all feelings in this work without any sense of difficulty. Keep up with the good work.
Hello Crissy, you have a good story. i like the way you arranged your ideas, it helped make a good story. moreover, you have a exciting beginning. i think you are on your way to becoming an excellent writer. keep up the good work.
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