I completely fell in love with this poem. I could really feel imagery although there wasn't a lot of detail given. The repeating idea of loving someone has to be farther than just skin deep, it really showed the intense feeling the author was trying to show. I really enjoyed this so please continue to write.
I felt power in this poem. I feel that the way its witten has an effect on how it means as well. There is good choice of writting. I feel like it would've been better if written with more detail to help the writters see more imagery. Maybe describe how his touch makes you feel and what makes you long for it. Overall this is a really nice poem. I enjoyed reading it.
I sincerely enjoyed this poem. I really like the rhyming idea , it made the poem rather flowy. The last two lines really made the poem in my personal opinion. Is the concept of this poem that the harder you hold something down the easier it is too leave? I noticed the lack of periods as well. Do you feel that there sould be no end to what you are saying?
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