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Rated: E | (4.5)
I liked it. It is very touching and it made me think a little. Though i don't like the way you have words that rhyme line after line. I would suggest spacing it out and putting some more lines in before another rhyming word. Many people get thrown off by those things and then tend to not want to read it. Other than that it was great.
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