Very well written- I don't know if this was a mistake, but it says "welcomed not back into these people's land" you might want to put the not before the welcomed. Just a little piece of advice. Anyway this was a very nice poem!
Great minds think alike! This is very well written! It just so happens that I wrote something similar to this with the same title-don't worry, I didn't copy and I didn't get the idea from you; I actually wrote my "Outside my Window" months ago. Anyway, this was a very nice piece of writing!
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