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#4353853

Review of Within.

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Rated: E

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Hi Kevin F. Dunn. I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the.public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes that a man's big hands are not made to create war.

CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem and poetic nuances. Your imagery is vivid, eg. Look beneath the the color of the skin and try to se what they really are. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem today. Rhythm creates happiness. Read alouds provide practice. The more you are the better your get!

TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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#4353740

Review of House Sparrow

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Rated: E

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Hi Amethist, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your , which I found on the. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes a delightful house sparrow.

CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, and your poetic nuances. Your imagery is vivid, eg you little creature that intrigues me. Your rhythm creates happiness and a read aloud or two. Your rhyme ican be sprinkled throughout your poem.

TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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#4353167

Review of Dog’s dally

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Rated: E

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Hi Dog's Dally I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. . 😏💪🏼

OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem is haiku. This is haiku with 5,7,5 syllable count.

CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your lyric/animals. Your imagery is graphic, eg, he jumped at me with wide eyes I couldn't resist. ~ snippet's leftover. Your rhythm creates happiness. Your a read alouds provide practice. Your rhyme has no unversed rhyme. Great write!

TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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#4353147

Review of With you...

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Hi Limitless, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes your outlook on love for another.

CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem and your poetic nuances. Your imagery is vivid, eg, When life leaves you a scar, I want you to know, still I want you to know.' Your rhythm creates happiness. It provides practice for your read alouds. Rhyme iallowed sprinkling throughout.

Corrections:
When the flame burns out..
Check your punctuation.

TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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#4352998

Review of I Think a Quill Be Noble.

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LINK TEXT HERE Hi. I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your , which I found on the. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of a quill be noble.

CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem of noblity, and your nuances of poetry. Your imagery is vivid, eg what if a quill have memory. Your rhythm creates happiness. Your read alouds provide practice. Your rhyme can sprinkle throughout your poem. Beautiful

TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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#4352022

Review of The Cycle of Life

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Rated: E

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Hi, Chris Breva, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your prose pieces, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your prose piece describes the ups and downs of life.

CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed your writing piece, with all the nuances afforded it. Your imagery is vivid, eg Life is not all lollipops. Your rhythm creates happiness. Read alouds provide practice. Your rhyme pattern is sprinkled throughout your prose piece. Well written.

TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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#4351315

Review of My Best Friend

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Rated: E

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Hi with a a heartbeat. I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem was written for the lucky couple.

CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem with poetic nuances. Your imagery is viviid, not in front or behind each other, but side by side. Rhythm creates happiness. Read alouds provide practice. Rhyme can be sprinkled throughout you poem,

Check corrections:
Spelling of waiver.
Editing for two areas. You u should check this.

TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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#4351249

Review of Substitute Apple

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Rated: E

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Hi. I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your , which I found on the. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture about a comparison of apples and melons.

CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, including poetic nuances. Your imagery is vivid, eg substitute cause Apple is dome. Your rhythm creates happiness. Read alouds provide practice. Your rhyme pattern is consistent. Creatively done.

TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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#4351240

Review of Lawn Mower Steeple Chase

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Rated: E

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Hi Catdok I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your pioet's paints a picture of mowing the lawn.

CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem about another race on Saturday. Your imagrty is vivid, eg Determination's on my face. Your rhythm creates happiness. Read alouds provides practice. Your rhyme pattern is consistent. Nice job.

TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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#4351227

Review of The Monsignor's Grave

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Rated: E

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Hi Winnie, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes a Monsignor's epitaph.

CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:.

I fully enjoyed reading your poem, including your poetic nuances. Your imagery is vivid, eg. Fair maiden mourn nor for this mortal man. Your poem is made up of free verse, which is fabulous. Your rhythm creates happiness. Read alouds provide practice. Rhyme allows sprinkling of your poem through and though. Wonderful job writing. I know a Monsignor too.

TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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#4350946

Review of Losing the battle

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Rated: E

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Hi Rockychico01, GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the.publiic review pages. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poems one describes losing a parents.

CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem. Your imagery vivid, eg I had if rough that year, changed schools, there was life after school. Your rhythm creates happnress, a few read alouds help. Your own is free verse Best wiishes. Well written,

Suggestions:
The world is its not it's

TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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#4350212

Review of Caught in the Rain

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Rated: E

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Hi Bikerrider, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review review. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .
I

OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes what it's like being caught in the rain.

CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem and the poetic nuances involved. Your images are vivid, eg don't rain on my wish to fish. Your rhythm creates happiness. It brings some tough ability to read aloud. The rhyme pattern in lovely and consistent.

TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:{/b
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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#4350194

Review of A Smile

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Rated: E

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Hi AUdra_Bransom, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

OVERALL IMPRESSION:{/b
You Poem paints a picture of a romantic escape.

CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem and the poetic nuances. In her imagery she actually talks with adults. She is technically refreshed. The rhythm creates happiness. She encourages some read alouds and feels they should go for totem at their level.

e:pencil}TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/rhyme /SUGGESTIONS
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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#4348195

Review of Truth

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Rated: E

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Hi Dorianne, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture about truth.

CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem including your poetic nuances. The imagery is vivid, eg truth. Your rhythm creates happiness with strong read alouds. Your rhyme is pleasant and it can be sprinkled throughout your poem.

TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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#4348184

Review of Home Grown Quotes 5

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Rated: E

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Hi T.L Finch I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes a sacrifice.

CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, and with poetic nuances. Your imagery is vivid eg, Sacrifice is giving up what you can't, even though you can? Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Your rhythm creates happiness with read alouds.

TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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#4348162

Review of In memory of my Father, I will miss you!

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Rated: E

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Hi Sew No more . I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your
Poems which I found on the public revieew pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes your dad, and the dad's eulogy when he passes away.

CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
Your poem is a eulogy you and your dad's statement are important. Your Imagery is vivid and will be taken home, eg time heals home. Your unrhymed poem creates happiness and a rough flow is
or read aloud. Your rhyme can be sprinkled throughout your poem.

TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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#4348107

Review of Where Is God?

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Rated: E

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H I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your , which I found on the. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem and painting a picture can answer The where is God.

CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
The enjoyed reading your poem, and even the poetic onuauance. Yhe imagery of your poem is vivid, eg and noted more by his presence thna ne hie absence. Your rhythm createshapiness and one or two read alouds. Your rhyme pattern is consistent.

TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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#4347344

Review of My Neighbor’s Yard

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Rated: E

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Hi Neva, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of yourpoem. which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints the picture.

CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem, complete with your poetic nuances. The imagery of your poem, is expressive, dew on a tulip. Your rhythm creates happiness and a few read alouds.
This is a lovely 17 line poem.

TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed

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#4347222

Review of Matryoshka

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hi Oriada Dajko I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes, the language of loneliness.

CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I truly enjoyed reading your poem and the poetic enjoyment that goes with it. Your imagery is vivid, eg, all around you, there is loneliness. Your rhythm creates happiness. There is a good flow of words with a read aloud or two. Your rhyme can be sprinkled throughout your poem.

TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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#4346683

Review of CHIDREN PLAYING: a sonnet

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Rated: E

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Hi, Dr. M.C.Gupta, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of children at play.

CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, with poetic nuances. Your imagery is vivid, eg their tiny world. Your rhyme pattern is consistent reads well. Rhythm creates happiness with one or two read alouds.

TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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#4346674

Review of Forever in Love

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Rated: E

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Hi. Tim, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poem, which I found on the.public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

OVERALL IMPRESSION:
You poem shows not tells.

CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem with poetic nuances. Your imagery is expressive, eg emphatic passion for life's beauty. Your rhyme can be sprinkled throughout Your rhythm creates happiness with one or two read alouds.

TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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#4346656

Review of The Bee and the Bloom

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, April I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture.

CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem. The imagery is expressive, you don't have it all together but together you have it all. Your rhythm creates happiness and one or two read alouds. Your rhyme can be sprinkled throughout your poem.

TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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#4345609

Review of Broken Promises

Review by GerMac

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hi JessAlvarez I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your , which I found on the. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture that the heart no longer loves.

CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
Despite broken promises, I enjoyed reading your poem, despite poetic nuances. Your imagery is vivid and expressive, eg love is deceived. Rhythm creates happiness with one or two read alouds. Rhyme can be sprinkled throughout your poem.

TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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GerMac

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#4345379

Review of Frog Hunting With A Three-year-old

Review by GerMac

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Harry, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

OVERALL IMPRESSION:
My poem describes the grandson's bull frog's experience.

CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed hearing about your grandson, including poetic nuances. Your imagery is vivid and graphic, eg who'd have ever guessed the frogs would not get his legs fried! One on my favorite entrees is frog legs! Your rhythm creates happiness with a strong read along ot two. Your rhyme pattern is consistent. Thank you for the delightful reading.

TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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GerMac

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#4345180

Review of I Remember You

Review by GerMac

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Miashay, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem sputtered for the last time.

CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:{/b
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, with poetic nuances. If she was dear to the family, I'm sure there was sadness all around. Your imagery is vivid and graphic, eg I remember when Dad took you to the garage for a simple tuneup. Your rhythm creates happiness and some awesome read alouds. The rhythm of your poem is sprinkled throughout.

TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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GerMac

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