Your Poem is an honest and very real story. It is so sad and hope seems to have fled the country. I wonder if now in the future girls will still have the Internet as a way of getting their message across.
Thanks for writing this Poem I look forward to reading more in the future.
Good Morning Ned. When I read the first line of your poem I knew instantly it was written by you. As I read the descriptive language it was as if the words came to life and I could envisage man contemplating life, a young woman at the beginning of her life's journey running and skipping with little time to contemplate the end of life and the older person in their final journey walking slowly and contemplating their fate.
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